"In the broadest sense we may find some nationally motivating collective enchantment with the dedication to committed refinement and perpetual honing of military formations and strategies that the US General Officer Corps has come to embody in the GWOT."
Ryan,
Gotta work on your brevity. That's one sentence. I can be damned "wordy" but that really takes the cake.
DO NOT- I repeat, DO NOT write a MOU, LOI, OER, or any other acronym-laced military correspondence with such verbosity. Some colonel from Texas will likely eat you for lunch and remove the remains with a silver toothpick.